Score: 3

"Not that good."

submission: NQ Episode 2 (Part 2)

date: September 3, 2004

It started off with promise, but it just didn't have any real plot. The graphics weren't that good, and the song didn't fit in my opinion.

It didn't have any action or drama, so that's why I didn't like it.

Keep trying though, you will find your niche.

Score: 5

"Well, that was cool!"

submission: .-.Windows Xp.-.

date: September 3, 2004

Very original concept. I think I can really dig this if it was finished. Cool how you started with the guy in the flash program, and he became alive and went to the desktop. I also love Ah-ha's song "Take on Me". Cool indeed!

So, please finish this, add more cool stuff, and develop the story more.

Score: 4

"Neat idea."

submission: squares game

date: September 3, 2004

You say that you are going to make a sequel of this, so my original complaints are going to hopefully be taken care of in the second edition.

As of right now, it lacks music, levels, and difficulty.

Hope the next one is awesome!!!

Score: 3

"Eh."

submission: This Movie May Scare You

date: September 3, 2004

Well, the graphics were not good, but the animation was better than the graphics. The voices were not bad, but the humming in the background was annoying. You might want to try and fix that. Also, lengthen the movie. Nice try though.

Score: 6

"If you can draw that well..."

submission: Stars Tailfeather

date: September 3, 2004

...than why are you making this? The only reason I gave you a 6 is because you had great drawings, but little animation in there. You can draw very well, but you really need to work on your animation.

The song went well with the characters look, but to get a better score, you will have to put a little more into this.

Score: 5

"It was a little boring."

submission: Claude's Revenge teaser

date: September 3, 2004

I found that I actually liked the music a lot more than the movie. As a teaser, it seemed to have no "teasing". It was just some guy crying, in a cloak, with one eye.

Next teaser you do, or better yet, next movie you do needs to have more action or drama.

Score: 10

"Oh god!"

submission: Prowlies at the River

date: September 3, 2004

The color, The angles, The movements, The emotions...Damn dude. You know your shit.

I really liked the way you captured all the details most people leave out. It really shows your attention to detail.

I thoroughly enjoyed evey second of this movie, and I am always looking forward to any of your work.

Once again, damn good job. Feel very proud!

Score: 7

"Not bad at all."

submission: Make a Gun

date: September 3, 2004

It was actually fun to make a gun. I thought at first that the pieces wouldn't look good, but they did. I was surprised! The fire part was also a cool modification. This sort of thing might be a cool addition to a shooting game or something...who knows... :)

Score: 5

"An average submission"

submission: Super Mario Skate PunX 5

date: September 3, 2004

I thought it was a little boring at first, but then you did the heaven thing, and the punk guy at the end. Although not brilliant, it did make me laugh a little. Keep it up with these new and interesting concepts.

Score: 9

"Though lacks in plot..."

submission: KH - Be Obscene

date: September 3, 2004

It definitely makes up for it in awesome graphics. I wish people would atch this and try to use that type of style on their work. I loved the fluidity of the images and the song was a very nice touch. I will look for more of your work as this really caught my eye!