Score: 5

"SOUND PLEASE!!!!! <3"

submission: B-S fanfic-short

date: January 29, 2005

Well, the characters were drawn exceptionally well, and the movements seemed like the original BonusStage, but damn if it didn't need sound. Even fake voices would have been nice. Your dog barking would have been better...lol

Anyway, keep up the animation, but next time, do no submit it unless it has sound. PLEASE?

Score: 5

"Um...."

submission: Quick Toon

date: January 29, 2005

Well, I don't get the point really. But that doesn't mean it's not fun to watch. The best part is at the credits when he shocks the guy. Then he....well...you know the rest.

Anyway, I would try and incorporate more stuff in it next time. Maybe add voices, BG music, and a plot.

Anyway, thanks for submitting to the portal!

Score: 7

"FUN!"

submission: Move the ball V1.O

date: January 29, 2005

Yeah, it's simple, and yes the graphics kinda suck, but SO WHAT!?!

This game is great! It wasn't boring. It made me want to beat the game. It was a wild ride.

Seriously, what more could you ask for?

Thanks bud!

Score: 5

"Complete this!"

submission: Jcoms Tutorial 2

date: January 29, 2005

You have a great interface for this tutorial, but you are lacking content. I found that you only really explained 2 of the 4 parts in detail. The first one didn't even have any info, and was completely useless to me.

Finish it before you submit dude. Unless I didn't see it, but I made sure I clicked TAB enough times to know that I didn't miss anything.

Anyway, really good interface. It made it seem extremely professional. Good job.

Score: 6

"Nice!"

submission: Kupa's Comics: Gum

date: January 29, 2005

Although it was entirely WAY too short, I liked the randomness of it!

You might want to put a collection of these together and release them all in the same flash. It would definitely make it worthwhile to watch.

Anyway, good job. "That was hot" Love it!

Score: 8

"Well, you have a good game here."

submission: DK Adventure Pt. 1

date: January 29, 2005

There is a lot jam-packed into this. Trivia, secrets, baddies. You sure used a lot of time researching how DK was setup. I give you props for that!

Once I got into playing the game, it was very fun! I like how you used all the characters in this as well. Testing all knowledge in all three games is quite challenging, but that's half the fun!

I'd like there to be more of a challenge scale in the beginning. You having to answer every question right or you start over can get quite frustrating though. Just keep that in mind.

Good job! I liked it a lot!

Score: 1

"Yay! Level 101!"

submission: Spike Crush

date: January 28, 2005

Wait, all you have to do is click rapidly on the area where it says "Level up"? MWA HA HA....so easy!

You might want to spend a little bit more time on your games before submitting them to NG. This one has absolutely no point what-so-ever. You knew that, yet you still uploaded it.

Tsk Tsk

Score: 5

"Not bad."

submission: Madness Revisted V.2

date: January 28, 2005

Krinkels would be proud, but you really left this unfinished. It needed some music, and some more action. A few scenes I saw were really done well, but ALL of it needs to rock for it to be on par with the rest of the Madness series.

Good luck in the future, and if I may suggest something...you should try to come up with your own idea, because you could definitely execute it. Your skill is up there!

Score: 0

"My eyes are bleeding!"

submission: The Wizard

date: January 28, 2005

Please help me! I need a doctor RIGHT NOW!

Seriously, that made me want to use mushrooms. I can't put my finger on it, but maybe it was the singing goblins, or the old wizard man who kept POKING every kid...

The song....uh....*shudders*....you should have burned your computer, because the song needed to be DESTROYED.

*vomits*

Score: 4

"Could have used a few more enemies."

submission: Pop-a-Cop (Copper Popper)

date: January 28, 2005

This was very basic. You only had one enemy on the screen at one time. If you put more on the screen, then it would have been a lot better.

The boss was easy, because after he knocked down the building, he didn't attack you, and you could kill him easily.

Did I cheat? Naaaaa