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Ok, why did you make it impossible? That one jump in the light brown box level was impossible.
Anyway, you need to clean up your game engine so that you can't get stuck on the tops of boxes. That got annoying really quickly.
The graphics weren't bad, and I felt like I was playing a semi-professional game there, so you did a good job. Just do some bug checks, and you'll be on top in no time.
Author's Response:
yeah i had some bugs i didnt realize. well i'm too lazy to change it now! thanx for voeting 6
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Not bad. Glad you included a few sketches in there. I love variety just as much as anyone else.
The sketches were a little short, and could have used a little more focus on vocal clarity and graphical succinctness.
I do like your style, so gimme more! Seriously, good job.
Author's Response:
Cheers. Look out of Fushi..soon.
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Too small dude. The animation might have been nice, but it was so small, that who could really see it?
I suggest you make your own backgrounds, and try to stay away from stick figures. Those two little things, and your movie will get higher scores.
Just a thought...
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Once you put in the song, and pictures you got on the net, you really didn't do any work. Just a couple of lines here and there, and boom, instant flash movie.
Sorry, it's not working, and it's not fooling me either.
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You really didn't plan out your story beforehand, did you?
Random isn't funny when it looks real, and I don't find pooping on clowns stuck in toilets particularily interesting either.
Sorry, but you should try much harder to get a good vote out of me. Good luck.
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I mean, it's drawn well, and the plot was funny, but I don't think seeing a penis was worth all that time.
Now maybe if the guy got the bully back, and we all saw his dick, then I might celebrate ;)
Not bad, and good luck!
Author's Response:
Eh? The blue fish that got his pants pulled down, hes a looser and Lenny kicks ass so stfu...we dont wanna bully back the bully since lenny kicks ass....aight?
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Is this France? Hahaha...
Seriously, you did an excellent job pasting your friends' heads and using them to talk to each other. What a splendid idea!
Plus, you are a great storyteller! I loved every single second of this movie!
Shaddup Donny! Hahahaha! Thanks for making this =)
Author's Response:
Thank you for this wonderfull review
you rock ;)
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There is no action, and those people block me from actually viewing your movie. Next time, or whatever, you should not have the people who are talking cover the screen. Make them appear on the bottom.
The sprites are cool (if I could see 'em) and the story wasn't bad. Needed a lot more action in my opinion though.
Anyway, see what you can do in the next episode, and keep up the good work.
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This game was great! Excellent job keeling me entertained with so many levels, and the background music was fun to listen to. I would, however, suggest that you make the person walk a bit faster, because damn if those first few levels didn't get a little bit boring when trying to walk to the opposite end of the map...
Anyway, awesome job! You rock!
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As a trailor, I really did think it captured any excitement the game has to offer. Most of what you displayed has very little substance and I found it hard to keep watching. Really, it was all the random stuff, the guy licking the ground after he jumped from the tree, little bits and pieces that I struggled to piece together...you really could have done better planning out eh story rather than just throwing little bits of the game at us.
The characters has no legs. That was especially weird.
Anyway, make the movie go faster, the characters more real-looking, and the scenes more understandable.
Other than that, everything else was superb.
Author's Response:
just watch the actual mgs trailer, it's just like mine. the "randomness" was purposely put in there, it's not a summery of the game you know, just a trailer. thanx
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