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Well, hopefully Tom gets to see this little Gem, cause it's really funny.
We all knew he sits alone at night playing Alien Hominid =D
Good stuff, and *thanks* for using my song. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for submitting/creating that song it fitted in really well, I wanted music from the audio portal only for this movie. Thanks for the great review!
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"Reminded me of my old Calculator game! w00t ^_^"
Man, this was set up extremely well. Very random and fun. I like that.
Everything was coded perfectly, and I found no bugs.
Music was great. Not overpowering and it had a certain relaxed feel. Great when I was being chased by those coppers. Just capped them, and listened to that relaxing music.
Seriously, great game!
Author's Response:
glad you liked it :)
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That was extremely fun to watch!
I loved the way everything was so well done. Blows Knox's clay stuff out of the water!
You sir, rule!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
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Really well done! Good job man!
I liked this so much, but please add music in the levels next time (a small song looped would be great).
Controls were done very well, and it was pretty difficult for me too. Graphics were great (were they from Gradius, by chance?) and the power-ups were also very good.
I really like your stuff, and want to see more!
Thanks for making that. I'll definitely play this game a lot in my spare time =D
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I have a few suggestions for you first.
I want to talk about graphical detail for a moment. Your movie seemingly centers around graphical detail, from the effects the book has on the guy, to the memory flashbacks that he has. The beginning scene was the guy walking. The shoes were not detailed enough to represent the seriousness of the movie. Also, the person's hands were drawn very poorly. Work on your colors and you will find that there is much to be gained from the use of many different colors. I did, however, like the drawings themselves. The cartoon pictures in the middle were drawn very well, and they showed me the innocence of the characters they were portraying. It's just with the seriousness of the movie, the pictures could have used a lot more refining.
Now, I'll talk to you about "switching." You started the movie out very dark and mysterious. That was great! But, then you switched it to cartoon-like pictures and the whole sense of evil quickly wore off. If you are going to do that, make sure you maintain the darkness theme you set up so well in the opening scenes. After the cartoon pictures, you switched back to the dark theme. It should either be more of a transition between themes, or the "lighter" scenes should still reflect the "darker" theme you have in place.
The music and sound effects that you placed in your movie were the shining part. They accurately reflected the mood, and I must say, you did an excellent job with the timing of sounds and eerie effects. The background music was also well placed and fitting.
The content of the movie was very random to me. I didn't quite get "hooked" at all in the movie. I found no emotions in myself that I could relate to the movie. That isn't because of you, though. It's just something I noticed.
The way that all the menus were done were very well layed out. You had looping music in the menus and that was a great addition. Plus, everything was easy to navigate. Thanks for that.
In closing, this movie was "out there." Very well done, but still had some loose ends. I would like to see more graphical interpretation next time around rather than text.
Thanks for allowing us to watch. It was very well done. Good luck on your future endeavors =)
Author's Response:
I liked your criticism on the graphics, at least you were one to capture the ‘innocence’ of the characters I drawn, as I mentioned before, combining opposites is my art, and I used innocent characters in the middle of a seemingly horror movie, which may seem wrong to most, but that’s my art! It is true that I need to practice drawing more often so I agree that the graphics need some work
I suppose it is true that the emotional outcome differs from person to person, so I’m not surprised to see that this movie hasn’t stirred you inside, it’s a very human thing, every human is unique
I thank you deeply for such a wonderful review! Everything in it was very useful to me, I thank you again and hope to see you review my future flashes :)
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Wow, you all have really improved in you game-making ability!
That was the best game I've played in a long time! The difference for me between the last one, and this one, was the last one focused on problem solving. This one relys on different concepts like money, ammo, speedy mouse tapping =) and it was far better than the last one!
I really liked how you put everything together! Awesome.
I have a few pointers. You all should give the player about a second or two to attack the enemys after you finish reading the text. I found that after you pushed the "continue" button, the enemies started shooting almost immediately. That should be changed to allow the player to move the cursor up to where the enemies are before getting killed.
I loved how you incorporated "mutant monsters" in this. It gave it a "resident Evil" appeal that definitely makes it great!
I thoroughly enjoyed beating the game, and I highly anticipate the next one.
Man, mini-bosses too. Fuckin awesome!!! =D
Author's Response:
Nice to hear from ya, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I noticed that it was hard to move the cursor to the guy behind the crate too but it was too late to redirect all the goto actions,
I'm thinking of putting in a reload in the next for easier gameplay, thanks for the review
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I think that you have some good-ass drawing skills. I mean it...
The concept was a little odd. Huge penis...naked lady...but it was still entertaining to say the least.
I would really like to see what you could do when and if you make a full movie, or game.
Lets cross the old fingers and hope that you make more!!!
Thanks, and good luck man!
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I loved this concept since the beginning!
I like this version better because it is much more refined than the previous version. The sounds are great! The gameplay is also excellent.
I think you should be making games and concepts for larger corporations, or, heck, you should go into business for yourself.
Heh, thanks, and good luck!
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I mean, when I voted on it, it was big. Now it's small.
I guess I'll just review it for what it was when it was bigger.
First, it was pointless. The guy just stood there and watched it burn. Boring!
Better luck next time.
Author's Response:
tee hee.
you're funny
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I'm sorry, but this was trash.
All the drawings were done horribly, and you just dictated what you were drawing. Not really good at all.
There wasn't any point, and it would have been nice to see you change the scene once or something, but that didn't happen.
If you were going for the whole "Teen Girl Squad" thing, then you missed it.
Author's Response:
first off.. drawings were ment to be bad.. that was the whole point.. Ugly people need to look ugly on paper and off..
the point being, is that I was bored and figured to make fun of em, not to make some super special effect clip with lots of scene changes and what not.. If i really wished, i could have added more.. but that would be a waste of my time.
and this "Teen Girl Squad" thing that you mentioned.. I dont know if this is a series or what.. but i never heard of it.. nice try tho
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