Score: 8

"Hey, just wanted to review!"

submission: Red Rooster Shootout demo

date: August 29, 2004

Well...I have played it up the point in which you all stopped making it. (Right after you connect the wires)

I have a few comments.

First, you really need to work on the graphics. Make each room unique and different. Give the backgrounds some style :) I would also suggest working on the graphics of the people. I *know* you can draw a person. Most of the people in this movie only have 1 pose, so it's not like you are animating some hard frame-by-frame stuff. Remember shading too!

Secondly, you might want to consider making your hit-test areas a bit larger. The doorknobs are especially small. It was a little aggrevating when the people you need to shoot are only able to be hit when they come out of hiding completely. You also give the player about a half of a second to react to the Ninjas (which was a little too short).

Thirdly, there is so much you can do with the story. You resorted to making it about ninjas that took over a restaurant. Although it's kinda funny, it isn't as serious as this game is. In the future, you should work on it.

Ok...now that the comments are out of the way, here is what I liked!

I really like the find the weird object to continue you path method. Very fun indeed! I also liked that when you die, you don't have to restart the WHOLE game over. You just go back to the previous room. This really helps in games where you only have 1 life. I also really liked how the music got serious after you saw the blood. It added a lot of mood. Got things off to a good start. So, good job on the music. Maybe when you get a little deeper in the compound, the music could change into something a little bit more dramatic. I liked the fact that your cursor was not only the gun, but the touch tool as well. That was cool!

Awesome work you two. NOW MAKE THE FULL VERSION!!! I am dying here!

Score: 8

"I am very impressed."

submission: Flash Madness Volume 1

date: August 28, 2004

My outlook at first was dim, but when you really got started, it blew my mind. You have really got some skills. What you need to do is harness those skills and create something awesome.

I will support you along the way!

Keep it up!

Score: 0

"uhhhh..."

submission: Crazy Bitch!

date: August 27, 2004

what's a "gand"?

Score: 2

"Well, at least you tried..."

submission: Megaman X7 stragegy guide

date: August 27, 2004

You did put in a little work. The facts were kinda interesting, if I could have read them in the short amount of time you showed them.

But, it was boring and badly done.

Score: 7

"Well, it was entertaining."

submission: The Yellow Cheese

date: August 25, 2004

Graphics were not bad, and the music fit well.

The story could have been told much better, but as it is, it still explained everything alright.

You did take the extra time to make the 3Dness come through, and it worked. Good Job!

Still, nice work Carmel!

Score: 5

"um."

submission: The Cartoon Parody!

date: August 25, 2004

Yeah, I really couldn't hear any voices. They were all like *muffle* *muffle*. I would recommend a Cotton Ball or Sock over your microphone next time you wanna do voices. Gets rid of that static sound.

As for the drawings, nice job!

I wish I could have understood what they were saying...

Score: 5

"Just gets weirder down the list."

submission: The Animals Revenge

date: August 25, 2004

Yeah, I have to say that was not so fun.

Although a lot of animals heads and different bodies, it got kinda boring really quick.

I wish that there was a "blank" head where you could see what the real body's head looked like.

Still, you have got a really colorful style.

Score: 6

"Uhhhhhhh......"

submission: Stupid Cop

date: August 25, 2004

What the hell just happened?

I am still scratching my head on that one.

What did it mean???????

(not your best Carmel...haha)

Score: 9

"Strangest...song...ever..."

submission: South Park Theme

date: August 25, 2004

Well, that was coolness...

One thing though, I felt like the audio wasn't streamed, cause it got out of sync towards the end.

But, none-the-less, Beautifully done Carmel!

I am starting to get the notion that you like South Park...heh :)

Keep it up!

Score: 10

"Excellent job."

submission: South Park 502 Part 1

date: August 25, 2004

That was a very hard project indeed. Getting everything to sync up must have been a pain.

I am only assuming that you imported the sounds...I mean, if can do those voices yourself, then OMFG...ha.

Anyway, excellent job, and maybe you can do a dialogue of your own, then put it to flash. Hell, you did most of the work already.

Excellent job sir, excellent job.