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Carmel...you have amazed me. This is one of the most elaborate tutorials I have ever seen.
Thank you for making a beginner and an advanced menu. I think that I will have to try them out. Well, I have to know how to make the world's best paper airplane, right?
Also, if nobody caught it, the songs were Linkin Park, done on piano...nice touch.
You sir, rule!
Author's Response:
Thank you RedCircle!!
I assumed alot never even heard of Origami so i made a smal background info, a short tutorial on how to follow the work and beginners option.. I think linkin park on piano was a great choice of music here and it fits great, cheers mate! I love making originals movies/games that i havent seen here before, thanks for the review! =)
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Although an incredible song, I would say that this just didn't do the intentions/emotion of the song justice.
There were some parts that I found very meaningful: The sign language part and the "you want to act like you're someone" part.
But the other parts seemed to just act out the lyrics. Not that that's what you weren't trying to do, but it felt empty.
I, being a song writer, would be more harsh when it comes to things like this. I write lyrics as a way to get my emotions out. They will be interpreted differently by everyone else.
That's why, when I see this video, the emotions just don't cut through.
I would also like to add that Linkin Park's music video's don't do much for me either, so don't feel bad. If there is one thing I hate in this world, it has to be a band having a music video of them PLAYING!!! THAT'S WHAT A LIVE CONCERT IS FOR NUMNUTS!!!
Anyway, I digress. You put a <emphasis>shitload of time and energy in this movie. Hell, the song is over 3 minutes long, and you didn't stop.
So good job!
Author's Response:
First off all, thanks RedCircle for the 7!
I tried making it as similar to the lyrics more than the meaning of the song, so thats why its like that...
Linkin Park indeed could have made a better music video than just effects to live video like in in the end or so..
It was hard to make, but im pleased from it..
The flash symbol becoming a pic was annoying to make because i accidently deleted the pic so i had to search for to long in google to find it because i even forgot what terms did i used to search it..
Thanks for the review!
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First, I'm glad you picked a legendary character like Cartman to work with...He is so damn awesome.
I really liked that this was an all-in-one submission. A little bit of dress up, soundboard, and the kickass "find Cartman section".
There were 2 things that were a little annoying. One, the dress up was a bit too cluttered. Two, the find Cartman pieces didn't quite match up with the slots you allocated. Just letting you know.
Anyway, awesome stuff and totally fun!
Author's Response:
Hehe cartman is indeed awesome ;)
Yeah, all-in one is a great thing, it was also very smooth i believe..
I guess if i would have made the dress up now, it would have been much orginized...
The find the cartman pieces was made with basic AS so i didnt have much possibility to it better.. sorry..
Other than that:
Hehe thanks for the review RedCircle!
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Why you might ask?
It is simple. You have the best view on this debate I have ever heard. You said what most people have been trying to formulate for years! Your animating skills are fun to watch and the music was spot on!
So...
I give you a 10/10 and a 5/5 for your wisdom.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Prisoner's Dilemma my friend, the biggest reason for many social, economical, and political consequences. DMX has to throw it in our face for us to realize it though. :P
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It was short, but still intreging. The beginning was a little slow. The motion was a little to choppy when turning to face the door. Good test movie though.
Hope to see the final version!
Author's Response:
yea its hard to make it look 3D witour any special tools. But i think it looks ok. I also hopes we will make a full movie
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Man...you really know your animation.
That was fun a shit to watch! The music diversity was also very refreshing and cool.
The drawings weren't perfect, but the animation looked hard enough, so I didn't mind.
I would put this in my top 100 easily!
Nice work!!!
Author's Response:
thank you! i'd put you in my top 100 people in poker!
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HAHA, that was fucking funny. Jeremy, you really know your shit.
Hey, $100 for a handjob.
You sir should be doing comedy work for TV.
Now, I am going back to play the game...again!
Author's Response:
Ha, I thought that was a funny moment too. If I got the chance to write for TV, I'd have to clean up some of the humor.
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But damn, you should warn us to not get any quesiton wrong...j/k...I liked that you get punished.
HA.
Could use a little more pizzazz, though.
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The FX were what made this flash. The drawings were also good (for sticks). There was one or two drawings of people, and that was refreshing.
The music was cool, and the timing was also really tight.
Give us a little more story or something.
Anyway, good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks :) Yea i used alot of time on the sound... i think i used like 8 hours or so. With variouse sound files.
Thanks for noticing :)
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"ugh, j00b, you could have done better."
Ok, I am sitting here, reading the forum. I know you have submitted these and I had to check them out.
YOU COULD HAVE DONE BETTER MAN!
Even I could have done better.
"It's late" is no excuse.
But, cool that you wanted to contribute to the portal, respect to you for that.
Author's Response:
I honestly didnt think this would make it, I WAS going to add stuff (And I still will), but I figured Id submit it and see how well it does, so i'd know how much work needs done...
It was floating around a 1.50 which was surprising to me... so I posted in the BBS and my score sky-rocketed.
I honestly wish this was blammed, that way I can re-submit a better version without the score being hurt.
OH WELL!
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