Hey, just wanted to review!
Well...I have played it up the point in which you all stopped making it. (Right after you connect the wires)
I have a few comments.
First, you really need to work on the graphics. Make each room unique and different. Give the backgrounds some style :) I would also suggest working on the graphics of the people. I *know* you can draw a person. Most of the people in this movie only have 1 pose, so it's not like you are animating some hard frame-by-frame stuff. Remember shading too!
Secondly, you might want to consider making your hit-test areas a bit larger. The doorknobs are especially small. It was a little aggrevating when the people you need to shoot are only able to be hit when they come out of hiding completely. You also give the player about a half of a second to react to the Ninjas (which was a little too short).
Thirdly, there is so much you can do with the story. You resorted to making it about ninjas that took over a restaurant. Although it's kinda funny, it isn't as serious as this game is. In the future, you should work on it.
Ok...now that the comments are out of the way, here is what I liked!
I really like the find the weird object to continue you path method. Very fun indeed! I also liked that when you die, you don't have to restart the WHOLE game over. You just go back to the previous room. This really helps in games where you only have 1 life. I also really liked how the music got serious after you saw the blood. It added a lot of mood. Got things off to a good start. So, good job on the music. Maybe when you get a little deeper in the compound, the music could change into something a little bit more dramatic. I liked the fact that your cursor was not only the gun, but the touch tool as well. That was cool!
Awesome work you two. NOW MAKE THE FULL VERSION!!! I am dying here!